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		By: Nancy Tuten		</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 21 Aug 2021 17:32:17 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://getitwriteonline.com/parallel-structure-vertical-lists/#comment-8&quot;&gt;Kimberly Calvi&lt;/a&gt;.

I am very glad you find the article useful, Kimberly. My goal with every post is to make clear something that people typically find confusing. I appreciate the feedback!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://getitwriteonline.com/parallel-structure-vertical-lists/#comment-8">Kimberly Calvi</a>.</p>
<p>I am very glad you find the article useful, Kimberly. My goal with every post is to make clear something that people typically find confusing. I appreciate the feedback!</p>
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		By: Kimberly Calvi		</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 20 Aug 2021 16:33:40 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[See, now, an article like this speaks to the very heart of how I like to see writing organized. My mother would attribute this particular fondness to being an overly-analytical first born. Thanks for articulating that which is so obvious to this writer and for publishing an article I can use to reference - should I need it - when convincing rogue clients.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>See, now, an article like this speaks to the very heart of how I like to see writing organized. My mother would attribute this particular fondness to being an overly-analytical first born. Thanks for articulating that which is so obvious to this writer and for publishing an article I can use to reference &#8211; should I need it &#8211; when convincing rogue clients.</p>
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		By: Nancy Tuten		</title>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://getitwriteonline.com/parallel-structure-vertical-lists/#comment-4&quot;&gt;Sam&lt;/a&gt;.

Hi, Sam. The intention is to make it read like a sentence. My rule of thumb (discussed in greater depth in the article to which you find a link at the end of this article) is to make the items free standing (i.e., no conjunctions) as long as the introductory statement is independent and can end with a colon. Contrary to popular belief, it&#039;s not always OK to put a colon in front of a vertical list--only if the info before the colon can stand alone as a sentence. I included lots of examples in the separate article that talks more about punctuation.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://getitwriteonline.com/parallel-structure-vertical-lists/#comment-4">Sam</a>.</p>
<p>Hi, Sam. The intention is to make it read like a sentence. My rule of thumb (discussed in greater depth in the article to which you find a link at the end of this article) is to make the items free standing (i.e., no conjunctions) as long as the introductory statement is independent and can end with a colon. Contrary to popular belief, it&#8217;s not always OK to put a colon in front of a vertical list&#8211;only if the info before the colon can stand alone as a sentence. I included lots of examples in the separate article that talks more about punctuation.</p>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Aug 2021 18:11:07 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://getitwriteonline.com/parallel-structure-vertical-lists/#comment-3&quot;&gt;Nancy Tuten&lt;/a&gt;.

I’ve generally shied away from commas and the last and/or. This usage reads too much like a sentence to me and if I wanted to require every listed item, I’d change the intro sentence to say that.  Otherwise assumption is “or”, like in your college student list where students might need funds for only one of the items, not all three as you’ve indicated with the use of “and”. Do I sacrifice any coherency or comprehension by omitting the ties?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://getitwriteonline.com/parallel-structure-vertical-lists/#comment-3">Nancy Tuten</a>.</p>
<p>I’ve generally shied away from commas and the last and/or. This usage reads too much like a sentence to me and if I wanted to require every listed item, I’d change the intro sentence to say that.  Otherwise assumption is “or”, like in your college student list where students might need funds for only one of the items, not all three as you’ve indicated with the use of “and”. Do I sacrifice any coherency or comprehension by omitting the ties?</p>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Aug 2021 15:51:34 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In reply to &lt;a href=&quot;https://getitwriteonline.com/parallel-structure-vertical-lists/#comment-1&quot;&gt;Yateendra&lt;/a&gt;.

Yes! I was trying to create an example that used dependent clauses (in this case, relative/adjective clauses), and if we remove “who had,” we no longer have clauses. But I will try to think of a better example that isn’t so repetitive. Thank you!]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In reply to <a href="https://getitwriteonline.com/parallel-structure-vertical-lists/#comment-1">Yateendra</a>.</p>
<p>Yes! I was trying to create an example that used dependent clauses (in this case, relative/adjective clauses), and if we remove “who had,” we no longer have clauses. But I will try to think of a better example that isn’t so repetitive. Thank you!</p>
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		By: Yateendra		</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Aug 2021 15:49:24 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description><![CDATA[In the example of subordinate clauses, can we not 
make the words &quot;who had&quot; part of the introductory sentence?]]></description>
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make the words &#8220;who had&#8221; part of the introductory sentence?</p>
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